Animation Voice Over

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In a normal world it  was nice and clean… next minute the world began to get polluted with people throwing rubbish into the sea and animals are dieing. Then there was 2 astronauts that decided to leave Earth and look for a different world when they left they discovered new planets. The first planet they discovered was Mercury, Mercury with was a colour of grey. When they went there it was to dark and there was no oxygen so they left the planet and left to Venus. Venus was a planet that was to hot. The planet Venus was the first hot planet but the second planet close to the sun. The planet was way too hot so they left the planet and discovered a planet that was never discovered. When they went there it looked like it was night time but when they got there they saw water so they went sleep and woke up the next day. Which when the next day they happened it looked like it was morning. So 2 years later they started  building and later on they they found out that the planet had oxygen and so they took off their suits and changed into their clothes and they lived in a world that will always be clean.