Stardome Writing

Walt: write a recount about a personal experience. Walt: use correct sentence punctuation.
Description: We had write a recount of what we did at star dome and how fun it was but it was as Fun as possible. HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!!!

Who?	Rooms 9/10
What?	To learn more about the
When?	Thursday 14th September
Where?	One Tree Hill Star dome
First of all we walked off to enter the doors of star dome then we walked in a room then we meet a man called John he was teaching us more about the solar system. He told us what the small planets are called and they are called midget planets. The big planets were just planets.
Next we got sent off into teams from our groups which we had four in each group. Next we had to look around the gallery and try and answer the questions that were on the clipboard it was kind of hard doing because there was a lot of people in the gallery but I managed to get through with it.
After that we had to sit on the mat near the dome door. We also had to give the clipboard’s to John so he could make the results of who won in the competition. Next he sent us off into the dome and told us to fill up the back seats first then start walking up. Next he was telling us of what we would see at night time. He also told us that we could see Jupiter and Saturn at night time. Then he told us all the stuff we could see like a kiwi and a scorpion.
Later on we watched a movie made from America's NASA. That movie we watched was a trailer that we watched at school aswell and that was very interesting for me to watch and I did luckily from stardome I was so happy when it started. The movie was in the future and what might happened to this world. The movie was about a dad named Mr.Trout which he was so interested about our atmosphere and if we could live on it and if there was any other planet we could live on it. Then Mr.Trout sent a man to space when he didn’t even know that Mr.Trout daughter had gone then Ashley Trout. Then they had to find information on three planets or moons and they did.Then they noticed that Earth was the only planet that we could live on and then that was the end.
In the end We went outside and said thank you to John and then we jumped on the bus and headed back to school.

CyberSmart Learning

WALT: Make the right choices using cyber smart learning and using our emails properly.
WALT: Use our emails in the choices and right decisions and making sure its right.
Description: This task was using Cyber smart in Room 10 and learning how to use your emails and how important it is to keep on the right things and to do the right things.

Animation Voice Over

Walt: make connections between spoken, written and visual language.
Walt: use correct sentence punctuation.

WRITE

Start your writing here.  Use full sentences.

In a normal world it  was nice and clean… next minute the world began to get polluted with people throwing rubbish into the sea and animals are dieing. Then there was 2 astronauts that decided to leave Earth and look for a different world when they left they discovered new planets. The first planet they discovered was Mercury, Mercury with was a colour of grey. When they went there it was to dark and there was no oxygen so they left the planet and left to Venus. Venus was a planet that was to hot. The planet Venus was the first hot planet but the second planet close to the sun. The planet was way too hot so they left the planet and discovered a planet that was never discovered. When they went there it looked like it was night time but when they got there they saw water so they went sleep and woke up the next day. Which when the next day they happened it looked like it was morning. So 2 years later they started  building and later on they they found out that the planet had oxygen and so they took off their suits and changed into their clothes and they lived in a world that will always be clean.

What is a solar eclipse

Walt: use paragraphs in our writing to organise our ideas.
Walt: explain a natural event. Image Link From:Image From Wikimedia Description: For writing we were learning about the solar system and the solar eclipse. The solar eclipse happened on the 21st of August 2017 in America. 38 years ago there was a total solar eclipse, it happened in 1972. So this is what we are learning about.

Captain Taniwhas Ending story

Walt: tell a story using a variety of sentences of different lengths; and Walt: ask for feedback to help us make changes that add impact to our story.

Captain Taniwhas Ending story

While Captain Taniwha was down in the sea he saw a big shark/whale out of his window. He didn’t know what to do so he thought and thought until he saw a boat on top of the sea so said “ how could I get all the way to the top of the sea”. Then he thought of an idea and he did it. He had a statue of him so he put it in front of him then he went to the back of his spaceship and swam to the top and climbed onto the ship. Next he saw that was now body on the ship and then he sailed away on the ship.

When he finally got to land he saw the spaceship station and he ran there. Then he saw a rocket and got inside and setted up the rocket to get ready for the  blast of and there he was ready to set off. 10,  9,  8,  7,  6,  5,  4,  3,  2,  1,  BLAST OFF! There Captain Taniwha was off to space. When he was in the rocket he noticed that there was a picnic bag and bottles of water he was thirsty and he was hungry. He went into the bag and started eating sandwiches, cookies, chips and some other kind of food. Then he drank some water and was soon finished for eating.

While he was looking out the window he saw the snotty nose then he quickly turned away and didn’t realise the aliens on planet mars. He went to land there and have a chat to them. When they got there he realised that they had homes in one village that was very big then he went and said “ I have come to live here”. So they said “yes”. Then they lived happily after.

Guardians of the galaxy

Walt: tell a story using a variety of sentences of different lengths; and Walt: ask for feedback to help us make changes that add impact to our story.